I find that people can be all the characters in this poem. Either they destroy one’s feelings or help them heal- it’s up to you to decide who you want to be. I really hope you all like this poem and feel free to leave your comments/ thoughts below.
Your words-
so hurtful and mean.
They surround me in a hurricane
of words I can’t escape.
My mind constantly
fills up with them-
only more power to you.
They drop me in the deepest ocean,
and leave me to drown.
Soon, all that’s left to
breathe are your words.
I’m going down,
so low, only my feelings can relate.
I only pray to make it up to the surface.
Then His hands- so strong and powerful,
carry me back to the surface.
I cry into His protective arms,
while He tells me,
“Everything will be okay.”
–poetrylover
Picture Source: https://dougvarnado.files.wordpress.com/2014/01/holding_hands
Really nice! I think your words are well-chosen to describe the torment we can feel when we are hurt. 😉
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Really enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you
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Splendid!
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Thanks so much ❤
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loved the feel of this poem. really well written. 🙂
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Thank you so much 😀
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