Golden hair,
chocolate brown eyes,
and a smile that lights up the world.
If only I was brave enough,
to tell you my love was for sure.
I smile when you walk past,
daydreams of you fill my head.
I laugh when I think about,
every word you’ve ever said.
I cry everyday, when I realize you don’t know me.
I’m the right girl out of a million,
when will you ever see?
–poetrylover
Lovely poem. But here’s a tip, so you don’t make the same mistake I did a year ago. Don’t let him slip away. Talk to him, before you lose him. You don’t want to end up heartbroken. Tell yourself you can do it, you can talk to him. Do it before he’s gone forever, and you fall into the same trap I did.
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Thank you so much for the advice, and I’m sorry it happened to you. Again, thank you so much 💙
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You’re welcome. I hate to see people become like me. It’s not fun to experience, let me tell you.
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Yeah, I can believe that. Wish you all the best 💙
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Hope someone see’s
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Thank you. Others have, but none really get to me like he does.
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All the best then
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Thank you 😊
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Ah yes, the dilemma of being unnoticed, not being taken seriously, belittled or just overall ignored. It’s a terrible feeling. My methods for this is highly simple but always breeds results, Stand out. Show initiative, determination(Ps: Don’t go crazy). Yes it sucks being unnoticed, but it begs the question who’s fault is it really? The person for not acknowledging you? Or not becoming something to acknowledge. It many not guarantee success in whatever you do in life but it does show a willingness to try and strive for the impossible. We all want to reach for the stars, but how many of us are willing to extend our hand? Beautiful poem, as always I like your work. Feel free to excuse the exposition. Hope you can change the stars.
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Ha ha thank you for your advice. You’re definitely making me see this situation in a new perspective. Thank you for every word you’ve given me, I’ll try to change the stars 💙
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Go for it, introduce yourself!😉
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Thank you for the advice 😊
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Oh no!! I was just going to say that you’ve made my day, until I read the ending! Could you hear my heart breaking under the crushing weight of your words? Pls, I demand an alternate ending… Pls assure me you have indeed ended up with your one in a million?
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Thank you for your thoughts- you’ve definitely reminded me of the power of words. I can’t assure you anything, sadly, but the dance is coming up and it may be my alternate ending 😊
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Go get him!! 😜
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Thank you, I’ll try my hardest 😁
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Nice poem. All the very best to you! 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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It’s a pleasure. 🙂
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Amazingamazingamazing! I also did the Mystery Blogger Award on my blog.
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Thank you thank you thank you!!!! Also thank you for doing it 😊
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Oh sorry I forgot you checked out my post 😅 . I’m really tired today 😂 😂
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Ha ha its okay go to sleep early 😉
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I feel like you were penning my sad love story… really, I was this girl, unnoticed, by my first love.
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Aww I’m glad I can relate my wiring to others but I’m sad that some of us had to go thru this 😯
Thank you
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Love forced is love lost. It has to be mutual. I am finding that out right now with my [perfect] girlfriend. Go get him if he wants to be got. Love him once you have him. We are not good guessers, we need to be told. I love how life is so poetic, never a shortage of material.
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Aww thank you so much for your insight 💙
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Wow thank you so much for nominating me! 😁
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Well written!!! Lovely
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Thank you
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Aww this is really this is sweet but also sad ❤ ❤ I am sure many girls can relate 🙂 🙂 Sometimes we just have to push ourselves out of our comfort zones, otherwise we will never know what might happen. Things will stay the same if we don't try something new to get what we want in life x x
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Yeah definitely. I’ll try pushing myself…and see where I’ll get.
Thank you 😊
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Yay 🙂 🙂 and always remember you will be fine no matter what ❤ ❤ We are each destined to be with someone who is loving, supportive, and will stick with us, even in the darkest times x x
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Aww thank you
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Your welcome 🙂 🙂 x x
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Lovely and poignant poetry!
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Thank you so much 😁
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You are welcome!
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Love this 😊😊
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Aww thank you 😁
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If you can’t let go off his thoughts, if you want pay justice to your heart, go and let him know who you are…
Btwn nice poem and still i wonder if this a fiction or not
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Thank you for your thoughts. This is, infact, a true experience I’m going through.
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Oh..okay i understand..
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Thanks
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Profound!!!
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Thank you
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so beautiful…..feels like you had me on mind before you wrote it…
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you could relate 😊
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You express your inner feelings well with this one. That mixed feeling of love and regret, talks loud enough. Beautiful and poignant. Two adjectives to describe your poetry best!
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Aww thank you so so much 😁
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You know you’re the right girl out of a million. Just do the right thing. I don’t know if it’s appropriate to say this now. Anyway loved it to the core.
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Thank you so much, that was really sweet 😁
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My pleasure
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Amazing 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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