Unnoticed

Golden hair, 

chocolate brown eyes, 

and a smile that lights up the world. 

If only I was brave enough, 

to tell you my love was for sure. 

I smile when you walk past, 

daydreams of you fill my head. 

I laugh when I think about, 

every word you’ve ever said. 

I cry everyday, when I realize you don’t know me.

I’m the right girl out of a million, 

when will you ever see?

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56 thoughts on “Unnoticed

  1. Lovely poem. But here’s a tip, so you don’t make the same mistake I did a year ago. Don’t let him slip away. Talk to him, before you lose him. You don’t want to end up heartbroken. Tell yourself you can do it, you can talk to him. Do it before he’s gone forever, and you fall into the same trap I did.

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  2. Ah yes, the dilemma of being unnoticed, not being taken seriously, belittled or just overall ignored. It’s a terrible feeling. My methods for this is highly simple but always breeds results, Stand out. Show initiative, determination(Ps: Don’t go crazy). Yes it sucks being unnoticed, but it begs the question who’s fault is it really? The person for not acknowledging you? Or not becoming something to acknowledge. It many not guarantee success in whatever you do in life but it does show a willingness to try and strive for the impossible. We all want to reach for the stars, but how many of us are willing to extend our hand? Beautiful poem, as always I like your work. Feel free to excuse the exposition. Hope you can change the stars.

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  3. Oh no!! I was just going to say that you’ve made my day, until I read the ending! Could you hear my heart breaking under the crushing weight of your words? Pls, I demand an alternate ending… Pls assure me you have indeed ended up with your one in a million?

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  4. Love forced is love lost. It has to be mutual. I am finding that out right now with my [perfect] girlfriend. Go get him if he wants to be got. Love him once you have him. We are not good guessers, we need to be told. I love how life is so poetic, never a shortage of material.

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  5. Aww this is really this is sweet but also sad ❤ ❤ I am sure many girls can relate 🙂 🙂 Sometimes we just have to push ourselves out of our comfort zones, otherwise we will never know what might happen. Things will stay the same if we don't try something new to get what we want in life x x

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      1. Yay 🙂 🙂 and always remember you will be fine no matter what ❤ ❤ We are each destined to be with someone who is loving, supportive, and will stick with us, even in the darkest times x x

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